Little do they know what's wrong and right
A weak voice in their head whispers in the night
Resisting the urge to give in to what their heart says
While body doesn't care about the price they'll have to pay
It was the death of their self control
But pleasure heard the drum roll
Once a mistake, twice a blunder is said by all
But have they not known, few of 'em ARE relished and recalled?
And if it wasn't for them shedding their inhibitions
Those wonderful moments would never fruition
But with their self control losing this lost battle
'Fear of the future' in their cages began to rattle
Thrice upon a time the feelings became stronger
The inevitable, the unavoidable, again did occur
Emotions mingled with desire, passion saw no calm
Complacent in the cocoon of each other's arms
Hinting the rise of something really beautiful
But oh baby, self control again had the great fall
The risk of letting the sweet verbal wars flow
He couldn't take, cos for certain he didn't know
What chamber of his heart did she fit in
Striving for what one feels, is it really a sin?
She let his unexplained logic take charge of this hassle
Sadly, we let self control bury what could be a lovely miracle...
A weak voice in their head whispers in the night
Resisting the urge to give in to what their heart says
While body doesn't care about the price they'll have to pay
It was the death of their self control
But pleasure heard the drum roll
Once a mistake, twice a blunder is said by all
But have they not known, few of 'em ARE relished and recalled?
And if it wasn't for them shedding their inhibitions
Those wonderful moments would never fruition
But with their self control losing this lost battle
'Fear of the future' in their cages began to rattle
Thrice upon a time the feelings became stronger
The inevitable, the unavoidable, again did occur
Emotions mingled with desire, passion saw no calm
Complacent in the cocoon of each other's arms
Hinting the rise of something really beautiful
But oh baby, self control again had the great fall
The risk of letting the sweet verbal wars flow
He couldn't take, cos for certain he didn't know
What chamber of his heart did she fit in
Striving for what one feels, is it really a sin?
She let his unexplained logic take charge of this hassle
Sadly, we let self control bury what could be a lovely miracle...
This is too good. The rhyme, the stanzas are all well-maintained. You should really write more.
ReplyDeleteReally good stuff there!! Keep it up!
DeleteFantastic ! Bloody brilliant !
ReplyDeleteThank you all. :D
ReplyDeleteits awsome !!!!!!
ReplyDeleteFor a second there, I lost my self visualizing. Very well written =)
ReplyDeleteThis is some amazing writing. You are exceptionally good. Should srsly start publishing soon!!!
ReplyDeletenice write up :P looking fwd to reading more
ReplyDeleteVery well put in words.
ReplyDeleteDefinitely not a nerd.
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body doesn't care about the price they'll have to pay : i love your very words but special line are meant to be remembered forever ;)
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